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Yours
   in the bus, beginning
      to drive as I write this line.

Yours in the destination and the act.
   Yours, frequently
      and unrespondingly.

Yours in the fastened black cardigans
   (don’t ask why) of H&M,
      in the turned up polo shirt collars
         of Manhattan dummies, and in the faces
            of a hundred thousand million strangers.

Yours in the imagined disapproval of a twice-folded
   pizza, in the humourless punchlines of reactions. Yours
      in the noughts and crosses of black boards and unusual stresses.
         Yours in the angry unfulfilled I-Don’t-Knows of
            silences.

Yours in captured motions, in summer television tennis,
   in now-rejected practises – salami, too much cheese.
      Yours in the fall
         to the floor of an ice rink,
            wondering if you would.

Yours under skies that look much
   too much like milk, on roads that all
      look the same, in quotes. Yours everywhere:

yours in a small train station café
   playing Bill Withers
      where I write this line.
©2008-2009 ~malicedomestic
:iconmalicedomestic:

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Nothing like a good, obsessional infatuation...

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:iconcarolan:
Great poem! I've forgotten, are you doing A2s this summer and applying for uni this Autumn? Sorry, M.E. makes me forgetful. Also, have you applied to Oxford or Cambridge, or both? If you don't get into the one you want, will you go to the other one?
Infatuation in sixth form? Reminds me of a time 30 years ago. I was desperately in love with a boy who was in Belfast Youth Orchestra with me. Because of him I went to Queen's University in Belfast to study Music and German instead of going to Oxford to study French and German. He repaid my devotion by getting engaged to someone else and inviting me to the party! They split up during my year in Vienna. By the time I got back he had started going out with my best friend whom he later married. I've forgiven them both, especially as I finally gave up on him after five years, came to Cardiff and met my husband!
:iconmalicedomestic:
ASs this summer, applying to Oxford this Autumn. And you can only apply to one of the Oxbridge universities at once.

And... this was just before I entered the sixth form... I've been kicking myself around about it since.

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Never again. I needed to turf out the blighter, the beater or biter who'd come like lamb to the slaughter to Salome's bed.
:iconcarolan:
Have you heard of the poet Tom Paulin? He is a friend of my eldest sister. I can't remember which Oxford college he lectures at but I can find out.
:iconmalicedomestic:
No, but I'll looked him up, thanks very much. I'm planning to apply to Wadham myself...

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Never again. I needed to turf out the blighter, the beater or biter who'd come like lamb to the slaughter to Salome's bed.
:iconcarolan:
He may not be lecturing any more.
:iconmalicedomestic:
Too true, too true... cell oxidation is the thief of time...

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Never again. I needed to turf out the blighter, the beater or biter who'd come like lamb to the slaughter to Salome's bed.
:iconcarolan:
No, I meant Tom Paulin may not be lecturing any more because he is of retirement age, I think.
:iconmalicedomestic:
Yes, that's what I meant.

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Never again. I needed to turf out the blighter, the beater or biter who'd come like lamb to the slaughter to Salome's bed.
:iconratafluke:
Hehe, an upside down love letter, beginning with the end and returning to the beginning (or end?) ;]

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A wanderer in darkness, waiting for the misty morning fog :blackrose:
... and a deviant who returns comments ;]
-> If you comment me I'll comment back :]


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