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To the heights and the furthest of the Northeast parts
in the lowest of areas where the Whin Sill carves
an igneous path through the national park,
the River will flow till it turns on its arc;

through the long and the far, past the rocks on the rocks,
it will turn and then turn through seizure and shock
by the twisting of fissures, but not think to stop
till everything meets in one vertical drop.

And even the stone at the top pulls its weight
when worn away under, lattices, breaks,
to drag the fall backwards, holding to the flow
so the heavy falls under to the sediment below.

Notice this shift in the whole of the stone,
as sharp as it gets while reaching the point
where lands flatten out and the waters head north:
the shape and the sound in the height of the force.
©2008-2009 ~malicedomestic
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About how the waterfall High Force in Yorkshire is constantly receding. Interesting stuff.

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:iconcarolan:
See? I told you you could write a poem about anything and make it interesting. Most poems about nature are deadly dull but this is great. I love the way the rhythm mirrors the power and constant motion of the rushing water. It reminds me of G M Hopkins' 'Inversnaide.'
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I've never been a Hopkins fan... some of Goethe's sonnets on nature are great. Thanks for that, by the way.

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Never again. I needed to turf out the blighter, the beater or biter who'd come like lamb to the slaughter to Salome's bed.
:iconcarolan:
I didn't like Hopkins when I was your age, either. I read a lot of Goethe's poetry 30 years ago but I have forgotten most of it.
:iconmalicedomestic:
There's some translations in my gallery actually, about five, starting with 'Nemesis'... have a look if you've got time.

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Never again. I needed to turf out the blighter, the beater or biter who'd come like lamb to the slaughter to Salome's bed.
:iconcarolan:
I remember learning ';Prometheus.' Isn't that one of his?
:iconmalicedomestic:
It might be, though I'd have to check... but I'm interested in this 'write a good poem about anything' - what's the hardest thing you can think of? :P

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Never again. I needed to turf out the blighter, the beater or biter who'd come like lamb to the slaughter to Salome's bed.
:iconcarolan:
'Write a good poem about anything: what's the hardest one you can think of?'
I'm afraid I can't think of anything at the moment. My ME is pretty bad today (it affects my concentration as well as my physical health) and I also suffer from depression which is bad today, too. Sorry I can't be of more help!

Did you get the email I sent you about getting your poems published in the small press?
:iconmalicedomestic:
Oh no, but I'll be sure to check!

Sorry to hear you're feeling out of it... get well soon and all that.

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Never again. I needed to turf out the blighter, the beater or biter who'd come like lamb to the slaughter to Salome's bed.
:iconratafluke:
A poem about geology, interesting indeed! Although the uninitiated might think this is about Star Trek ;]
I don't understand every line - guess haven't read enough English poetry - but I like the sound and rhythm of the last line :]

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A wanderer in darkness, waiting for the misty morning fog :blackrose:
... and a deviant who returns comments ;]
-> If you comment me I'll comment back :]


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